As I watched the sunset on the beach
I couldn’t resist but wonder,
How much it resemble our life
Everything having a hidden meaning,
Like the waves in the sea,
Life has up and downs.
When a huge wave rise from afar furiously,
Roving till it touches the shore tenderly.
life is full of challenges and obstacles,
that we learn to deal gradually.
Like the foots step that leaves a deep marks,
which is washed away after few seconds.
We leave marks in others life.
Which is forgotten by the time .
Life is full of wonders
With most unexpected awaiting us
As the sun disappear in to the horizon
We wait till it rises again for a new day.
7 comments:
wow..varah obi heheh ..nice one about life.u r really a greatpoet :) totally luvvvvvv it.
ya..i agree..varah cool...nice one gal :D
nice poem :D
-plz remove word varification-
i like this part
Like the foots step that leaves a deep marks,
which is washed away after few seconds.
We leave marks in others life.
Which is forgotten by the time.
other parts are just nonsense!
thank u guys....
hav a heart grysko, it's my first post so ....
will try to make sense in the upcoming post ...thnx anyway.
nice ! i like it
Its just my humble opinion. Things that are non-sense to me may not me nonsense to others.
Any way m waiting for ur next post.
Ps. I have a heart. Not sure though! XRays say so :D
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